Festival Walk, a shopping mall possess a great number of luxury shop. Between those top-name stores, however, an academic name stands out in the middle of the shopping centre which is City University of Hong Kong. There is a escalator to take people to the school. However, if you want reach it , first of all, you need to come up against a stream of people. After you pass through the multitude successfully, you can see the entry of the City University of Hong Kong Which is a long tunnel. The tunnel is not a simple one but designed. You can see a huge monitor showing the news about the school. Moreover, the wall of the tunnel is covered with a lot of pictures. Each of the pictures represent a college and a different group of people can be seen with something related to their college. It is meaningful that student can feel what they would like to be if they join that college.

When you walk through the tunnel, a totally different scene would been seen compared with the Festival Walk, from complex to simple, material to spiritual. When you look from left to right, a sense of symmetry could be felt. A symmetrical pillar, a symmetrical stairs and a symmetrical road with rainproof design. Also, the academic building has been applied symmetry, no matter the windows or the doors.

Beside the design, there is a interesting thing and sound you could see when we walk through the tunnel. Different groups of people dressing special uniform including formal suit and DIY clothing stand in the middle and shout with different slogans. You cannot really hear what they shout about since they are compete with each other. Because of this competition, only noise you can hear when you want to walk into the academic building. When walking through the road, you will not only encounter those noise but also the greeting from different groups of people. All of them will shout near you and gives you some souvenir. It will be a horrible experience if you have tried.

When you pass through those groups of people, another special scene will be seen before you enter the academic building. As mentioned before, there is a road with rainproof design in both side. All people want to enter the academic building must walk through one of the road since the middle is full of people. There are five doors you can choose to enter the building. However, people from the two roads will not choose the middle one so that a interesting view can be seen, a large empty space in the middle door while a congestion happened in the remaining four doors. 
Chris
2/20/2013 04:26:43 pm

hi,pan
your description is really detail. With the some additional suggestion, I think you can add some about your feel about cityu. Do you love it or not?

BTW, the people avoid through the middle door because of the saying that the students who walk through that will not be able to graduateXDXD

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Nardo
2/21/2013 02:34:58 am

Your writing give a real picture that I see in cityu, however I think it is better to use more words or adjective on description(slogans, souvenir DIY clothes and so on).

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tim
2/21/2013 01:52:29 pm

good job ..... good panvvv

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Tim
2/21/2013 01:56:10 pm

The third sentence . you need to add "to" after want :)

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Tim
2/21/2013 01:56:26 pm

i go to school by bus

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2/24/2013 12:23:58 pm

Nice essay Pan. It's good to describe the path walking to our college and I have the same feeling as yours during the promotion period. It's noisy but fascinating. I love to seeing that 'shouting' and that's what we call u-life.
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Mui Ka Tsun
4/22/2013 01:15:00 am

Very detail description. Nice one:)

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